A Number, quantity, degree
Look at these comments written by a college teacher on assignments handed in by her students. Note the expressions in bold.
A good paper, it's clear you've spent a great deal of time researching the subject you quote a wide ravage of sources
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Some good points here but It's not clear to what extent you are aware of all the issues involved. Global trade affects nations in a variety of ways.
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I think you've misunderstood the topic to some extent. You've written in excess of з,ооо words on areas that are not entirely relevant. Let's talk.
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Grade: B
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Grade: C
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Grade: F
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B Generalising and specifying
In this class discussion, the students make fairly general statements, while the teacher tries to make the discussion more specific.
Marsha:
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Well, I think on the whole parents should take more responsibility for their kids.
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Teacher:
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Yes, with respect to1 home life, yes, but in the case of violence, surely the wider
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community is involved, isn't it? I mean, for the purposes of our discussions about
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social stability, everyone's involved, aren't they?
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Marsha:
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Yes, but in general I don't think people want to get involved in violent incidents, as
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a rule at least. They get scared off.
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Teacher:
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True. But as far as general discipline is concerned, don't you think it's a
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community-wide issue? I mean discipline as regards2 everyday actions, with the
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exception of school discipline. What do you think, in terms of public life, Tariq?
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Tariq:
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I think the community as a whole does care about crime and discipline and things,
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but for the most part they see violence as something that is outside of them, you
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know, not their direct responsibility.
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Teacher:
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OK. So, let's consider the topic in more detail3, I mean from the point of view of
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violence and aggression specifically in schools. Let's look at some extracts from the
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American Medical Association's 2002 report on bullying. They're on the handout.
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1 or in respect of, or (more neutral) with regard to 2 another neutral alternative to 1 3 or (more formally) in greater detail
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